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Activity 4

Editing and improving our recount 


  • Look back at the recount you wrote for Activity 2 describing the leopard and the impala.
  • THE WEEK magazine would like to publish this exciting recount so you had better get editing!
  • Use our non-negotiables list and improve your recount by adding some fronted adverbials


Use a different coloured pen to edit your recount.

Tick the non-negotiables off as you go!


Ask your grown up to read your recount and see if they can help edit too.


Have you managed to include some fronted adverbials?