Editing and improving our recount
- Look back at the recount you wrote for Activity 2 describing the leopard and the impala.
- THE WEEK magazine would like to publish this exciting recount so you had better get editing!
- Use our non-negotiables list and improve your recount by adding some fronted adverbials
Use a different coloured pen to edit your recount.
Tick the non-negotiables off as you go!
Ask your grown up to read your recount and see if they can help edit too.
Have you managed to include some fronted adverbials?